budding writer

hey there Belladonna ( Can't help saying, interesting name! ) First of all, Welcome to the YWS group. I can see that you've just joined and this is your first ...

Hey there! Hope you remember me.! I know its been terribly long since I've even been back to YWS and and now here I am. And yours is the first ...

Hey there! Budding writer here for a review! Firstly, let me start with your title. The title "Diakrino" was very striking and catchy. So naturally I wondered what it was ...

Budding writer here for a quick review! "Okay," I begin, "tell me something that burns out fast." Cassidy smiles; she raises her hand up to place it on my shoulder. ...

Hey there! Budding writer here for a review. Ok lets get started: Nothing much to review really. I really loved your work. Your way of writing so eye catching and ...

Hey there! Budding writer here for a review. Ok lets get started: "The light, it hurts my eyes as I open them up to the sun. " It would be ...

Hey there! Budding writer here for a review! Lemme start from the beginning: NITPICKS: "A voice. Someone was trying to speak to me." I think the sentence needs to be ...

Hey! Well let me tell you I'm a total sucker for these types of books specially involving twins or triplets. And if you want to go ahead with your idea ...

Hey there! Budding writer here for a review.I'll start from the beginning. NITPICKS: "The flowy material of my dress hangs lightly over my black high top converse. My mother told ...

Hey there! Budding writer here for a review! I''l start from the beginning. NITPICKS: "Repay your debt in a week or shut down your dispensary." Mr. Mehta ordered. You could ...

Hey there! Budding writer here for a quick review! I'll start from the beginning. NITPICKS: "Waves spread through her vision and suddenly the cane she was gripping leaned foreword " ...

Hey there! Budding writer here for a review. I''ll start with the nitpicks. NITPICKS: "It was my job to do the shopping and cleaning and washing of clothes." There are ...

Hey there! Budding writer here for a review! So here goes: Firstly there are alot of issues with your grammar that you need to correct apart from that I felt ...

Hey there! Budding writer here to review! Ok let me tell you point by point: 1) Even though the concept is fine the title was too obvious. I can tell ...

Hey there! I just loved this was just so beautiful. The way you described the child's emotions so humbly and beautifully was just amazing. Your poem really drew me to ...